Is this song I wrote any good?

I would say better than i could do for sure.I wonder a ittle if the ending is actually and ending and the part about demoralizing your slate i would say state---as in state of mind.-----------my 2 cents.Again i am a good critiqer if thats a word but i personally could never finish a whole song like this.--good luck with it.I hope to hear it on the radio someday.